Friday, February 11, 2011

Chain Story. "The Slasher."

Author's point: In class we did a chain story. My story started, with a girl coming home from the library. Later threw out the chain it started to get confusing for me to read so I re-wrote some parts and fixed sentences.
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It was a dark, cold night. Victoria was walking home from the library. For awhile in school everyone talked about a killer named "The Slasher." But, Victoria was the kind of teenager that didn't believe in those stupid stories. She only believed it if it was on the news.

Later, That night after she brushed her teeth and had her pajamas on, she turned on the news. "News that just came in, 6 kids were reported missing last night, they were last seen after a party." Said one of the reporters. "Witnesses say they saw them kid pulled into a black van." Victoria stopped and turned it off right away and ran up stairs to her room and rested her head on her pillow. Then she fell asleep.

Victoria woke up to a scream. The scream was coming from her basement. She got out of bed and slowly walked down the stairs to the basement. When she got there. There was no one around. She looked down by her feet and there was green goo on the floor. What is this?!" she yelled! The green goo was all over her feet and started to to rise up to her knees. When she heard a sneeze she turned around and her friends jumped out yelling "GOTCHA!!"

For a while Victoria was mad but, in a couple minutes they laughed it off. Her friends explained how her smart friend that loves to deal with computers, Pete hacked into her TV did a wireless cable to a camera. So they could make there own News cast. " But where did the green goo come from?" she asked... NO one knew what she was talking about. Until they saw a black shadow run around them....

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